falling due to the deadliest poison
into the darkness and the chaos
karma wouldn't reach me a rope
to escape this destiny cage
laying inside a gloomy cave
the solid rock is cold as death
i can hear the horrid screaming
of the flying specters around me
they want me to surrender
to join the death, once again
my eyes get flooded with teargas
and believe me, i might give up
A contest entry
- Take Me Down by Sle3p.
450 points, ended April 4, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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its realy sad and scary at the same time,it was not to long or not to short.i loved it wonderful job.
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Thank you very much =]
i did aply in your previous contest as well, you got some good contests, my friend!
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