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Stone and Bone

Tomorrow is an unknown
It may never come
Today is a waste
Left undone
Yesterday is a memory
Forever gone

Tomorrow is possibility
Without hesitation
Today is a new day
With renewed motivation
Yesterday was
With great celebration

I see uncertainty
You see possibility
I see the plan
You see the end
I am petrified as stone
You are hopeful to the bone

Where do we go?
Whose heart will we follow?
Take it easy, and go slow?
Or take a deep breath and swallow?

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  • sluha
    April 3, 2007

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    wow the first part sure rhymes a lot and kinda fits well together huh? I like "I see uncertainty, you see possibility" haha somethings are perceiived differently by others. Which would come to the thing of who is right. therefore coming to the question of is good a point of view? (im a big star wars dork... so who is right anakin for going into the dark side and seeing things in a new perspective, or obi-wan kenobi who fought to keep the jedi order alive) but yeah anyways people perceive things differently which would make us think that for others our "bad" is their "good" finally leaving the good/bad thing behind us... like a faded memory... I like your last line... kinda made like a big bang to wrap it all up... "Or take a deep breath and swallow" good work...