Inhaling your scent
as you enter the room
I am instantly aroused
You look at me and you know
seeing the hunger in my eyes
I touch your face
Tracing your lips with my fingertips
Slipping one into your mouth
Feeling the heat from your tongue
I search it out with my own
Heat penetrates my skin
I feel your hands slide over my body
Touching the spots that you have claimed
so many times before
You savor the many varied tastes of my existence
My lips molten and moist
Your tongue probing secret places
Pushing your head deeper
Squeezing you between my thighs
Lip to lip, lapping every drop
I quiver, crying from the sensation
as you quench your desire
Captured by heat and hunger
Giving you more of me
Wanting more of you
You slowly kiss your way up
your pulsating rod finding its home
You grab my hair, kissing me with a mouth on fire
my nails digging into your back
Pulling you closer, and closer
deeper and deeper
Riding the tides of passion
on waves of emotion
entering that realm of sheer oblivion
our cravings satisfied
In a list
A contest entry
- Devilish Delight by Sensual Sapphire.
875 points, ended April 22, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was very intense.
How sweet to give your lover complete control.
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Yes,yes,yes,Yes
all i can say, what a ride and filled with delight and enjoyment.
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Let me guess... he's a cashier at ICBY at the mall? You did say you would look at shopping differently... You slipped him an extra hundred when he made your sundae? I know, that has nothing to do with the poem... What can I say about this poem without getting in trouble with my girlfriends? Well constructed and leads to a great climax? OK. That works. Three bunnies and you can kiss her once.
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Seductive
"You savor the many varied tastes of my existence"
I great line, very well done
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this is incredible...
I really hoped that you got the gold trophy for this poem. It is an absolutly gorgeous piece that is very detailed and it shows a lot of emotion, I love how it flows like the leaves in a midsummer breeze gently being tossed around...anyways I think that this piece is simply amazing and I really hope to read some more of your works soon
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Dear me!
You were right, I shouldn't have read this right now.
Mind to gutter.
Horny tale
Of Erotic
Tension
Working up to a
Real climax,
Intelligent, subtle and
Torrid.
Excellent.
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Excellent
Very amazing words
Rick
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Nice work
Very nice images created with this poem. I love the last stanza and how it is expressed. Keep it up.
Terry
Riding the tides of passion
on waves of emotion
entering that realm of sheer oblivion
our cravings satisfied
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wow...this is utterly amazing you have worked you magic yet again...you certainly are good at these sort of poem keep them coming xx
laura xxx -
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Very good pun at the end there...
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"seeing the hunger in my eyes, You savor the many varied tastes of my existence, Giving you more of me,
Wanting more of you, entering that realm of sheer oblivion our cravings satisfied"
Now that's some sweet examples of fine diction that I can appreciate. You have exquisite flare in the art of erotica my dear and I am NEVER dissapointed with ANY of your writes I have read thus far. I LOVED it! Excellent! Excellent!
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a beautiful and loving sentiment
caring is the tone of this sensual write and so it is a mature presentation of passion, The narration is strong and it carries the emotions and intensity well...overall, very well done...PK
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This was very sensual and erotic without being vulgar .. very intense feelings and vivid imagery. though I do not write erotic ... I enjoyed this piece very much!
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This is so exquisitely sensual and mildly erotic - vivid visuals painted thought your wonderful words, and the picture certainly a bonus too. Certainly is delightful.
. Rewarded 4
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well, hello! sounds like you're in love and lust all wrapped beautifully together and expressed so elegently that you get shivers of envy reading this....thanks for sharing!
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Definitely hot and well written. Good luck in the contest. D
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Smokin HOT, The devil must be smilin!
Dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! This is smokin RED HOT! I will be over there>>>>>>>>>>>>Drooling and "stuff" this is brilliant, splendid, all the things that are in the best Belgian chocolate when you take that first bite!!!..."entering that realm of sheer oblivion our cravings satisfied..." Yummmm....*sigh* lights cigarette now....
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erm... very exciting write you have penned. Best of luck in the contest. This freaking sizzles!
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