There is a cold, a cold of terror,
A cold as a beast, a cold without error
A cold of no mercy, no grace, no love,
A cold of no heat, no antidote of
A cold that makes even seasoned men quail,
A cold that renders helpless, the boast of of gallant mail,
A cold that shivers the hearts of those not known to fail,
A cold,
A cold,
A cold of no curtail
A cold that bites, with fangs of ice,
A cold that claws, with icy paws,
A cold, shear slice, with no device,
A cold that kills with frostly jaws
A cold that tears, with lack of cares,
A cold that burns, a brave's concern,
A cold that bears all hells sick prayers,
A cold of Sheol, no victem returns
A cold of deception, to lure to stark death,
A cold of deadly potion, to poison frosty breath,
A cold of no perception, no fathom, no breadth
A cold of no emotion, no soul, no heart to shred
A cold that seems the victor, the victor over life,
In the end to be destroyed, by heavens holy knife.
Author notes
unfinished, unedited, unspell checked
poem about cold
A contest entry
- Take Me Down by Sle3p.
450 points, ended April 4, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DEEP, DARK, EMOTIONAL, ANYTHING! by Heavens Child.
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Bronze trophy winner
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This is great! This is awsome ya know? And UR?
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a cold
this poem is great. keep on writing.
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I love the poem, the imagery is fantastic. But if you read the rules you may want to adjust the authors notes and re-enter....lol. If you don't that's okay, but it may be disqualified just for fairness sake. You've done an excellent work with this piece.
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great work
i loved it ,cold was the perfect name for it lots of great discription i realy like the poison frosty death......makes my shivers shiver.
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