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"So Long"

I see you
every day and
sadness has
overcame us.
You speak no
more and yet in
your eyes you
seek for more!!
You try to
forget me and
yet you regret
that thought.
You change your
being.
Is it because
your feelings
have change?
Lonliness is what
was seen in you
and now another girl
is by your side.
I guess in my
own world I
thought me and
you had something
on.
I guess I was
wrong
you feel in LOVE
with another one,
but in my
dreams I was
the one!!
So Long My
LOVE!!!

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  • SoccerXvida
    July 14, 2007
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    this poem rocks and i can relate to it!!!!!
    awesome chica, keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!