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Crafted

Missing image

 

between rugged bricks and mortar
of a classical builder
and the mirrored light and shadow
of a modern architect 
stands human beauty

crafted by

 

a true master...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    April 4, 2007
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    Such a great poem...

    Lane


  • Mat Larkin
    April 4, 2007
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    short and powerful..

    you capture all of the elements..the entire piece could be a metaphor...Nicely done...Mat