Since you are no longer here I wish I gain the power
to stop the sun from setting because when night falls
it is the hardest for me to escape the pain that I am in
right now.
And when the sun rises it is easier for me to pretend
that everything is alright.I am so busy into the life that
we lived together now I lead it by myself. I wonder to myself
will it ever come a moment that I dont have to pretend to myself
or give the false security to others that I will feel like I did prior
before that night my life shifted.
The worst part for me is that I am not alone I have our children to
think about that crosses my mind all the time.I wonder if I am handling
all this for them so the added worry is not put on them.I see through their
faces the past reflection of the love we shared between us. I see so much of you in them
in their daily actions.I hope that I can do justice in the finishing raising
them that will do you proud.
So as I close another day with putting the children to bed we say our
prayers hoping that GOD is happy with his new angle on his team. I head
for the bedroom dreading the moment I have to climb into the bed we shared
that now I sleep alone tossing and turning with memories of you.And before
I close my eyes I say a prayer so maybe in the moring that I will see life
in a better scheme and I will be able to look up at the star light
night without feeling so much pain.
Please tell me what you think
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Great....
WOW...
This was great.Nicely put, well written with poetic flare.
Nice flow of words attracting the reader with their innocence resulting in a pleasant sounding poem with a message of unreturned love. This has a nice flow and sounds good. It says a lot
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sad
This is sad,my faverioute line is " I see through their faces the past reflection of the love we shared between us" buetifully stated,also "hoping that GOD is happy with his new angel on his team" very well done, I assume from this write that the person you speak of that u love so much has passed, I know what it feels like to loose someone you love and that is close to you.Just believe that they send you sighn's all the time,to show you they never really left you,physically they may not be present, but in spirit they never leave. -
Awwww
This so sad and painful to read. you expressed yourself well and you will get through this it's hard and it will take time but you will. I did. very good!
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amazing.
it was wonderful...
just so open, and heartfelt.
i loved it....
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This is a dark and sorrwerful write!
But in reading it i saw hope, just a little bit
of light shining through.
I saw a loving caring Mother who loves still for the sake of her children. yes he has gone and left you sad but we do get by with our family and friends.
Sometimes we can feel only our own pain, i bet that the children still love and miss him also, they have you to help them through and for that i bless you.
Your strength came through Girl, keep srong until that light shines brighter...It will!
God bless you and your's.
Brilliant write with true emotion.
Slán agus gra
Dolores xx
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So much feeling...so much strength...my heart is beside you, I send you healing and hope! So beautiful is this poem. My tears are falling as a prayer for you and yours.
Blessings,
Azlyn
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night falls...
night falls my friend... but as Hemingway said:
THE SUN ALSO RISES
I wish you strength!
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Wow
That is powerful stuff! You are right to go forward taking the future one day at a time, and I wish for you increasing strength with each new day. As I wrote elsewhere, this is nothing that you and G-d together can't handle. Continued Success, R.
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A loss is a hard tough battle
especiall when you have it all on one set of shoulders. May God help shoulder a lot of your load.
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Very sad story. You should go through this and remove some of the spelling errors and grammar errores. These take away from the story you are telling. I lift you and your family up in prayer.
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Heartfelt
I myself am less of a poet and more of just a writer, and I get the feeling perhaps you are the same. This is a very heartfelt piece even if others might not think its exactly a poem. Thank you for sharing your pain. I hope you find that peace of mind youre looking for
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