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Tied to the Tracks

I'll write my own bible
repeat it in my head
dedicate it to memory
to replace what you've said

envelopeing all trains of thought
the great derailer of my heart
I see no tunnels of light nor dark
guess i missed the green pastures part

food loses tase and music looses sound
sleepless, lonely, weary and weak
I've lost my song and fell into hell
My Holy Word says not what to seek.

Author notes

written into the wee hours of the morning...not my best...i'm only happy w/ the first stanza. thanks for reading,

Madison

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  • UrbaN PlaguE
    April 11, 2007

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    Hey I really like this one, even though you say it's not your best it does have lots of potential and meaning, to me at least. Great job Madison.

    Josh.


  • Colossal Squid
    April 4, 2007
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    +3


  • Colossal Squid
    April 4, 2007
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    you make me want to bleeeeeeeeeeeed.
    becuase i am not as cool as you.

  • emLeejo
    April 3, 2007
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    Hey..

    May not be your best, but its still so you! lol, you can tell on ur writing, but i love it anyways. this was good. i enjoyed reading it lol.. but now i've read your new poems so i must be getting to bed.. i need sleep and omg i have to tell you about the meet tonight! lol yay!!! i havent been able to stop smiling! loves you!