Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Happiness

How can this be love
Happiness is far away
And I am alone

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Olivias Violin
    April 5, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    very good


  • legendofcj
    April 4, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I have read a few haiku.. I am trying to understand it for myself, because I wish to do a few haiku poems.. and I thought you compared your point to a theme of nature.. but my verdict on the poem... I can only guess that you are describing how you feel about someone... perhaps you have both confessed love.. but are unhappy and truly alone.. I wish I could give better advice, but I just took my painkillers and am a bit stupid. But, I think I can see what you are trying to get at!