Kirra, am I, Spirit of thought
Wherever I go, destruction is wrought
Fighting the part where macabre is sought
Run from me, now, or may you all rot!
Alone in this room, words flee from my pen
To scatter, hysterical, across the page, when
In my mind they weave circles, leave echoes to spin
Webs of vulnerability in its dark corners of sin
The light raineth down, from the luminous moon
Where the one who has stolen my heart will evermore loom
He hides, and snickers, in his impervious kindom, immune
To the cries I thrust upon his hearth, where they lay evermore, strewn
Author notes
Uhm... I decided to do a poem about Kiara kuro, my name and character in my story, yeah, and this is what I have so far. Mhm. I will probably keep adding stuff when I think of it. =]
Please tell me what you think
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keep going wit this, has great rhthym and very smoothe..love the words you have chosen..." In My mind they weave circles, leaves echos to spin..."
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thanks guys, I'm going to try to add more to this one... it just seems... short.
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Alone in this room, words flee from my pen
To scatter, hysterical, across the page, when
In my mind they weave circles, leave echoes to spin
Webs of vulnerability in its dark corners of sin
thats my favorite verse!!!
Ohh I love it!!
this has a great flow, and wonderful rythm!!!
Your words are amazing, and the rhyming isnt tacky of sticky, this is awesome!!! great job!!! -
Nice job, Kiara-chan ^_^
You know what, 5th period is boring. But hey, we ge tto use the computer lab. I already told you I really liked this, so I'll say something else...um...I rather enjoyed reading your work....0.0 Wow, uh, out of character much? But whatever, you know what I mean. Great job, yet again. You freaking genius.
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where did this come from cause i wanna go there, you did a great job on this, i was an aamzing read, keep it flowing
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