your morbid laughter shakes the rafters
"this won't be very painful
but it will be quite shameful
my mascara tears run down my cheeks
and my adrenaline rush grows weak
i give up fighting against my chains
because it only makes your plaesure gain
you take out your sharpened blade
and slip it under my disheveled braid
you begin to slice my silver shirt
but not heavy enough on my skin for it to hurt
i hear my sparkly shirt drop to the floor
i don't see, my eyes won't open any more
you turn me to look at you
as you yank me forward, i can't look through
the horrid fact of whats to come
so far away from the safe place i came from
your acidic smell fills my mouth
and your distorted smile blocks my shout
you're reaching, once again, towards my chest
and only your greedy mad mind knows what happens next
R_ _ _
i'm to shattered now to fill in the blanks
Author notes
option 1 2 and 4...
A contest entry
- ♥ Broken Hearts ♥ (A Contest For My Birthday) by Bruised.Roses.
450 points, ended April 16, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - dark and sad rhyming poems please by nobodys-girl.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark, Demented, why not!?!! by wanderingstarlet.
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Please tell me what you think
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Great Job, It Is So Poweful.
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This is extremely powerful, and well written. Great job, and thanks for entering!
xx Julie.
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Wow
I truly hope that this was fiction; if it was not, please know that you are far stronger than any circumstance of your life - for you have talent and ability. You have talent enough to put this experience into rhyme, and you have the ability to be strong and share such an experience, which could help others heal. Very powerful words, poetesse.
***Rae***
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that was different... i liked it. but it was so hard to read for the colors.... hurts my eyes!!!! but thx for entering.
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this is soo very sad....thankyou so much for enterng and good luck!
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Wow. Such a powerful write. It was so raw and real. Great write. Good luck in the contest!
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Impossible à lire avec ces images! Tu m'as dit que tu n'es pas américaine, mais tu dis sur ta page d'auteur que tu habite à New York!
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wow this was powerful and I can relate so much. how you ended it with the r_ _ _ that was great very impacting....thank you for enhtering and good luck
XTashaX -
good poem
Goodluck in the contest -
This is really creepy... But really good.
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