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Two Years



Two years
      I have been sliding down the trail of tears.
Two years
    Wash me away.
But every time I slip and fall
Every time I cannot crawl
      Your there
To help me along
With sunlight in your eyes
My Angel in disguise
To help me along

Two years
      I’ve been swept up in the river of pain
Two years
      Carry me away
But every time I start you drown,
Every time I lose the ground
      You’re there
To make me strong
With music in your smile
My Angel in denial
To make me strong

Two years
      I’ve been lost in the ocean of screams
Two years
      Sweep me away
But every time I start to cry
Every time I almost die
      You’re there
To right the wrong
With love from the start
My Angel in my Heart
To right the wrong.


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  • howler monkey
    April 4

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    wow

    angie i really like this its beautiful. your words flow really well and its full of passion and grieving emotions. i love it and you.


  • mimzmonkey
    November 17, 2007

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    Wow...this is REALLY good. I luv it♥ I agree, it would be interesting set to music. Fantastic write Angie
    ~Erika~


  • Seven Kinky
    May 31, 2007

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    I can't believe nobody has commented on this yet! *is shocked...but not too shocked to do the first comment dance* LOL...wonderful write, my dear. Sounded like lyrics more than poetry. I could really hear Smile Empty Soul or Three Days Grace singing this. Yesh...I'm a closet pop addict. Don't tell anyone! Anyway, I'm rambling. Point is, this was a great write, and I absolutely forkin' love it. Kudos...