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World of mine

There is a world I know
That no one else can find

A world of knight, demons, and romance
But also pain, misery, and revenge.

Its a world of beautiful fields,
and castles that reach to the heavens,
and legends fall from the sky.

Young girls save the world,
and heros die with honor.

The day you find it
is the day it is released
from the caverns of my mind
and the legend of the silver knight
Comes alive

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  • jcat gold member
    March 29, 2008
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    I know this world very well myself!!! I love to visit it and play there!!! I find this world deep in the pages of books and get lost in them often.... You made me sigh with the need to revisit those places as it has been awhile for me.....Very well done and I hope that your silver knight comes alive for you soon.....


  • xXxtyxXx
    June 28, 2007
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    nice poem

    your writes are really unique and capturing


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 4, 2007
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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    Wow I love the imagery in your writing! Iwonder if someone will eventually open up that mind of yours and you find that knight.
    Lovely write! I really enjoyed reading this.

    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene