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Now You Leave Me

We'll be Juniors next year in High School,
... And Now You Leave Me,
The First Father's Day without Our Dads,
... And Now You Leave Me,
You were helping me get through my Eating Disorder,
... And Now You Leave Me,
We Hugged everyday,
And Now You Leave Me,
I Miss My Dad,
... And Now You Leave Me
Our High School Graduation will be here in 2005,
...And Now You Leave Me,
But then I realize...
You HAVEN'T Left me...
Your spirit is with me,
Its your body that has left this earth full of pain,
And its my Happiness...
That has LEFT ME.

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To Vicki & Megan... There are so many things that seem incomplete without them here.
Written July 11th, 2003

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  • PoemsOfALifetime
    June 24, 2004
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    I agree with blue_eyes on that your friend was a very lucky girl to have you as a friend. There are not many true friendships in this world now a days. How are you doing on your eating disorder? I hope that you have continued to get help for it. If you ever need to talk I'll be here to listen also. I can understand how you feel with all of your sadness. Having everything happen all at once. Feeling like you are going to drown in your own tears. But remember that you have people around you that do love and care about you.


  • blue -eyes
    February 10, 2004
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    your friend was so lucky to have you. great job


  • August 6, 2003
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    from the soul poem

    You hit the nail on the head. They may not be here in the flesh, but they will always be with you in spirit and in your heart. Keep the faith kiddo, it will help you overcomw the worst of the grief. Good luck. Mary Anne


  • YerTweetyness
    July 21, 2003
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    EXCELLENT !!!

    Hey Sweet Sara, Honey .. I can really feel your pain. I can't imagine how it is. Sweet girl know this, I'm here for you. I'll let you bleed all you want to me. My arms and heart is opened for you Sara Dawn. When we chat next , I will send you my email , ok ??

    Biggest Warms Hugs Sweetie , {{{ Squeeze }}} Lets dry those tears.


  • Cadee Blaze
    July 14, 2003
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    This amazing and touching. I lost my best friend this year and have been a little lost at times. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Blessings, happiness will vist it you in the future.


  • witchyflyer
    July 13, 2003
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    wow.

    this poem is very sad... and not what I expectedd

    Death is both a morbid and beautiful thing...
    a natural transition from our world, to the after-life (whatever you amy believe in, I myself am Wiccan, so I believe in reincarnation)
    And hopefully they will be with you in spirit until the day that you move on.


  • finding myself 84
    July 12, 2003
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    Aww This is another sad poem... although your poetry is very sad it's beautiful in a sense. Wonderfully done. *sonya*


  • Always4you
    July 11, 2003
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    I have just read your poem about Megan and now know that this poem is about your other best friend!
    I can't say i know how you feel as i don't but i wish you all the luck in the future! May your friends spirits live on...
    xXx


  • Always4you
    July 11, 2003
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    This is really sad and very touching!! You can really feel your sadness in this poem. Is this about a friend of yours?
    Brilliant write!
    xXx

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