"A penny for them"
should I share?
A smile, or a tear...
not a care;
Without a fore thought,
shall we play it like sport...?
and tell all, for a do...
or a dare.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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that was a fun
uplifting write for a short limerick type poem . Its always fun to have a read on something with a lighter touch to it -
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Thank you
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This was definetely very Whimsical. "A penny for your thoughts" is something said around my house often. We each carry pennies with us and when one is presented the first thing that we can think of no matter what it is.. is what is said. It keeps less tension and things are always more peaceful in our house than most other's I've noticed as we always talk about what we are thinking!
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Thank you for your kindness Yes, my old granny was fond of the saying...another favourite was "Take care of the pennies and the pounds will take care of themselves"
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i think that it all depends on what mood the reader is in if you want my response it was a little confusing but i still liked it
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Story of my life "A little confusing" hits the spot Thanks for your response...a;ways very much appreciated
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I think it is an interesting poem, but the effectiveness really varies on the context the reader see's it. If you were to put it in a random poetry book it wouldn't be as effective as say, in a booklet of some sort on the subject at hand.
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Thank you Douglas for your comments...yes, they would need to be compiled into " ideas" rather than randomly thrown to the wind I find I write this "ditties" when subject matter is scarce
that being said, I do enjoy the nonsense behind the words of this whimsey as it brings out the "child" in me
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"and tell all, for a do...
or a dare."
I like this ending, very nicely thought about. This poem is short, sweet and cute. I like the way you
expressed a beauty within this. The picture is also very beautiful!!!
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Thank you Often the things we remember from childhood, has the strongest connections with us as we grow older..."Do or dare" was a favorite of mine The picture I borrowed from somewhere but I promise to put it back
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I'll give you a penny for them. I love this It's short, sweet, very cute and leaves the reader with something to think about. A very good thing to do in my book
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Glad you enjoyed it Many thanks for your kindness
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nice job. too cute. I liked it very much. thank you for sharing. keep up the great work. peace and light always in all ways, kp
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Thank you Delighted that you enjoyed...
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MMM very nice. I read it twice and I love it. it makes the reader think with out messing with their head tahts hard to do. well done.
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Never did like people messing with my head either Many thanks for the kindess
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Very good.
I like the hidden mystery of the poem.
Neat idea and a neat poem!
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Thank you Cactus for you kind words, as always, very much appreciated
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this is a really cute poem and I abosolutly love your
pictue for your face it's adorable, great writing so keep it and don't waste your talent. -
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Thank you Whispers Glad you enjoyed it
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This is a "cute" poem. The temptation and hesitancy that surrounds a thought you want to share but dare not. There are associations here for everyone, I'm sure.
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Thank you...I get these mad moments where I have to write what pops into my head ( must learn to do it on notepad)...lol Ah well,perhaps tomorrow I will have my "sombre" head on
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