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Never Let Go

A wondering mind
((Your One of a kind))
Listen to my lies
((There enough to make you Die))
I Hold you in my arms
and listen to you cry
I'll never let you go
((Your MY one of a kind))
My words fill your head
((Your Wrapped around my finger
Like lifeless thread))
I'll keep you safe, just stay with me
((listen to my words
I promise You'll never want to leave))
A Wondering mind
((MY one of a kind))
You listened to my lies 
((They were enough to make you die))
I hold you in my arms
and feel no heartbeat but mine.
I'll Never Let You Go
((You'll always be mine))
My sweet little one of a kind.

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  • lost star
    January 23, 2008

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    wow.. well i've been offline for so long.. bou two years, off busy having babies, but came back to find an amazing poet had commented on my poems and said they laked them, twas you!! a very big thank you, was chuffed that such a great poet also enjoyed reading something of mine.... anywho, this is great.. loved the way it just sounds like thoughts, beautiful words that flow so well. overall one of the best poems i've read in a long while, i'm adding you to my favs

    x lost x


  • burning alive
    May 25, 2007

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    I like it! I think its fuckin awesome man. Oh... haha, and don't worry I I couldn't spell if my life depended on it man

    -Angel-


  • MisJudged
    April 9, 2007

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    I'm not trying to upset you by commenting, but you once told me I had talent and you didnt want to see it go to waste, well, I've told you that you have talent too. And you do. I'm just glad to see that you're not wasting it.


    • Silent09
      April 17, 2007
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      yea but your the only one that commented it it's cuz it sucks....