Symbol of commitment
Flash of rainbow colours
Beautiful in her strength
Cut to blue-white perfection
A jewel to strive for,
Or sometimes die for.
A contest entry
- ~ JEWELS... BEAUTIFUL JEWELRY!! ~ by Melodies.
450 points, ended April 7, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Eloquence in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
1400 points, ended July 31, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A jewel to die for . . . that could be literal or figurative . . . as could other images in your poem, which is what I like about it. There is more within the stone to be seen than just its shine. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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brilliant write
best of luck to you in the contest xxx cheeky xxx
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Thanks for reading and applause. xx
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In so few words you have penned an excellent portrayal of this awesome stone. Just beautiful and I wish you the very best of luck in this contest
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Thanks for reading and applause Julie, it's appreciated.
Ann
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Oh, so beautiful!!!
Yes, the poem AND the diamond! 
Beautiful to see and own but not to die for, although it has happened throughout history. 
I really admire the way you illustrated and wrote this poem. 
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Thank you
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