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Basically I'm........

Basically I'm...
Just a helpless little girl,
Trying to tell you...
That I'm worth more than this,
No matter what you think is true....

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lithium

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  • Matthew-Parry
    May 18, 2007
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    Entriguing

    This write is short, yet soo perfect in that it describes a very powerful emotion in just a few verses. I often find it challenging to collaberate powerful thoughts into a meaningful write. It is not an easy task. Excellent write!!!

    Hope to hear from you.