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Day in Glam

//Slam glam\\ ~ Glitter whore~

 Death is   

              s

                 h

                   i

                    m

                      m

                        e

                          r

                            i

                             n

                              g  

                                  at your door

♀   Life you lead, full of lust ♂

F     L     E

  A     L      N  

                   tears,

                            turn

                                to

                                   dust

¶¶¶ Black the sunrise, shattered hope ¶¶¶

   € Sunset brings a faux-love grope Ә

☻Broken sparkle in cocained eyes ☺

  ♠ Cracked smile

                           n

                          t

                            w

                           i

                              n

                            e

                              d with lies ♠

::Glittered::glowing::neon::sign

{{Sugar trip}}: hit alcohol’s vine

***Cotton-buds*** cover swollen eyes

♦A ♦day♦ survived♦, good♦night,

                                  G*o*o*d*-*b*y*e

Author notes

Option 7, combining 1,2, and 4

Wordbank:
Dust
Death
Shimmer
Life
Lust
Sunset
Sunrise
Love
Fallen
Black
Glitter
Tears
whore
Shattered
Glittered
Sparkle
Broken
Cracked
Entwined
Glowing
Cotton-buds
Alcohol
Cocaine
sugar
hit
trip

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  • KittieLyyn
    May 27, 2007
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    beautiful!!!


  • Dark Whispers
    May 23, 2007

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    this is the best dirty pretty poem I've read in a long while, and the rhyme scheme was perfect. thanks for entring


  • Crazy-Baby
    April 7, 2007

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    wow, i really like this poem, ou used the wordbank really well and i love the dirty pretty! well done and thanx for entering x x x


  • Elvenfairy
    April 3, 2007
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    I really liked this! It was very creative, and fun to read and look at!

  • Trew
    April 3, 2007
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    What an amazing picute you've drawm with your words. Good luck in the contest

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