Standning face to face,
evil destroying our place,
so here i am and here i stand,
the ground i guard so grand.
A sword at my side,
demons neck it glide,
bow to my hand revenge found,
and here is where i stand my ground.
Demons shall not take our lives,
but feel the wrath of our knives,
plunging deep until they are bound,
now is where i stand my ground.
Betrayed by my anger emotions bend,
forced to fight to the bitter end,
stabbed and bleed and here i drowned,
trying to stand my ground.
"Life seems so long,
have no stregth to go on",
angels call out their sound,
here is where i stood my ground.
Author notes
Option 1 Stand my ground - within temptation
My Immortal soul lives forever
A contest entry
- Options- AND LOTS OF THEM!!! by Darkened Seraph.
825 points, ended April 16, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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hmmm, this is good, i mean this is good, i love this poem you did a great job on this, i mean that, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This is excelent. The rhyming is great the flow is great cept for one part where there is one sylable too many and you have used the title really well to create a really strong image in the readers mind, well done and thankyou for entering
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never mind you have made it so much better well done, i love it even more.
keep writing and i will read
kelbornro -
i love it kes, you might want to work on the rhyming and the flow a bit though. but then again it gives it that querky sort of orignality.
i love the description and the wording so bravo
keep writing and i will read
kelbornro
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