When a dream came true
After the dreamer vanished into oblivion
In the mind.
A deferred smile came on the invisible face
On the verge of reality
He has gazed
When the children of freedom were raised
In chaos disguised as serenity
Till the olive branch
Has given him the deferred smile
On the injured face
Fading away through the crimson horizon
To high above ground.
(Note: I've posted this poem on Everything2.com using the name "Blueray" but it was deleted due to egregious spelling error)
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I can only warm to anyone who uses the word "egregious" correctly! And the poem is not at all egregious! Although it's a bit unclear!
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