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I'm

Alone in a crowd
She pours soul into music
And hopes for better
Better to come from
Her pain

Author notes

Option 8. Started as a haiku and evolved into a new breed of monster. It's about me, just wrote in the third person.

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  • Pointyfoxears
    April 4, 2007
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    Second line is wonderfully expressive.


    • Athena of Starlite
      April 6, 2007
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      Why thanks Laura. Would you mind donating some of your poems to the "Send the Poor Kid to Europe" fund? (I kinda already took them but please!!!! call me for more info)