razor razor lil razor
your a good friend to me
you've always been there
form the 1st time i felt true pain
razor razor lil razor
member when mom and dad fought?
member that day?
it's the day i 1st found you
razor razor lil razor
can you still member all the games we played
member tic tac toe? when we used lines and x's
member the game of life?
razor razor lil razor
do you recall that boy?
he was my 1st love
member how you sat up all nite with me?
razor razor lil razor
do you member uncles suicide?
member when you helped me cry out the pain
member when you said it could be the end
razor razor lil razor
do you know why you lay could for so long?
it was the boy who has my heart now
he said i didn't need you.
razor razor lil razor
wanna play a game today?
for the boy no longer cares
no longer wants to love
razor razor lil razor
wanna finsih the game of life?
i think i could win
wanna try?
razor razor lil razor
can't i try again?
please i thought i'd win
i didn't think i could lose the game
razor razor lil razor
you won the game of life, congrats!
i can trust you to take the pain away
you said you know whats best
razor razor lil razor
did they cry when they found me?
did they see you took away the pain?
did they see his name on my wrist?
razor razor lil razor
did you know i loved him?
did yiou know i'd die with out him?
did you know your my best friend lil razor blade
A contest entry
- x x For the Dark Emotions x x by Fallen Grace.
500 points, ended September 1, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dead Letters and Black Roses by Redrusty66.
650 points, ended April 23, 2008, 19 entries
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Great write. Eerie lines brings across the imagery in perfect form. Nice construction and flow. Kept my attention and allowed for individual perspective. Awesome use of vocabulary. Thanks for the read.
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Wonderful poem, I can relate to it a lot. I started cutting because of a boy and then another one came a long and said I didn't need to anymore, he promised to be there for me. The lier.
Anyways, I really like this poem, I can understand what your saying and feel the emotion.
Great job and good luck in the contest!
~Kaela~ -
AMAZIN
I understand for I too share your best friend so I know where you are in life and I love this poem -
very dark and emotional
but if you need someone to tlk to im here
and ill try my best to help
a wonderful but sad and dark poem
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