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I Am No Longer A Broken Girl

darling,
i think [i ♥ you]


when you give me teddy bears
&& (my favorite candy) skittles
you remind me how wonderful it is
to f
    a
      l
        l
in love with someone like y.o.u


sweetie;;
do you want to know a
.x.secret?.x.


my ribs are no longer s/h/a/t/t/e/r/e/d


&& these >>photobooth memories<<
mean everything to me.

[baby,
just promise me you
will never let me go]


Author notes

11 months =]

i ♥ chriss.

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  • L.Jay
    May 23, 2007
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    && these >>photobooth memories<<
    mean everything to me.

    I love this line!


  • makeout kid
    April 3, 2007

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    this is sweet.
    veryyy heartfelt && darling.
    love it.
    i'm glad you have someone to make you write such [cotton.candy] words.

    i ♥ you.

    keep smiling.


  • InfiniteCaitlin
    April 3, 2007

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    awww dollie I love it!!!! and im glad youve found somone who makes you so happy!!! 11 months, thats amazing!!!! this is a great write, and it oozes with your happiness. I love it behbeh, and I love you!!!

    ♥♥♥


  • najji
    April 3, 2007

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    Poems like these, make it hard to judge. [Which makes every thing awesome because their is a million volts of suspense.]

    when you give me teddy bears
    && (my favorite candy) skittles
    you remind me how wonderful it is
    to f
    a
    l
    l
    in love with someone like y.o.u


    I love skittles...

    and That Stanza thing...

    yeah..

    Awesome job, and thank you for entering!


  • lysdarling
    April 3, 2007

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    aww..this is sweet, i lub skittles from the bottom of my zoo, they are awesome. i love the last line especially, lovely write, sweetums
    xoxo,
    lys


  • love tank x
    April 3, 2007

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    "&& these >>photobooth memories<<
    mean everything to me.

    [baby,
    just promise me you
    will never let me go]"


    Aww I looove this =]
    It's so sweet.
    And congratulations on 11 months!
    It's pretty much the best feeling ever, right?
    ♥♥♥

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