KissMyLips
PullMyHair
CutMyThroat
DyingIsMyFavorite[Fashion]
TellMeI'm*b*a*d*
[Naughty girls turn you on]
i know
PutMyHandInYourLap
FrustrationsRunAmok
DarlingWhatAreYouDoingToMe
LyingIsMyFavorite[Passion]
LeaveMeToMyDirrty*t*h*o*u*g*h*t*s*
[You love to hate me]
i know
YourTimingIsPerfect
ThisSituationIsPerfectly
Temporary;;I'llBeGoneInTheMorning
YouJustLoveToHate[Me]
ItWasTheCraziest*T*h*i*n*g*
[Just one kiss && I'm in love]
i know
SituationsAreIrrelevantNow.
Author notes
"Situations"
Escape The Fate
XxGutterFairiexX
"For a pessimist, I'm pretty optimistic"
here are the lyrics to give you an idea of how !hot! this fucking song is *OH!gasms* ...^_^.
Situations are irrelevant now.
She loves the way that I tease,
I love the way that she breathes
I touched her ooh, she touched my ahhh, it was the craziest thing.
I love the girls who hate to love because they're just like me.
A certain girl she took my hand and ran it up her thigh.
She licked her lips and pulled my hair, I fall in love for a night
She can't behave and I'm just a slave,
don’t worry I'll be gone when the morning comes.
Darling what is going on?
Honestly that never happened
Lying is your favorite passion.
Leave me, go where you belong
Higher heels and lipstick napkins
dying is your latest fashion.
The frustration it's a regular thing
I hate the ones who love to hate because they're just like me.
A certain girl she took her hand and put it in my lap
*It's way too... she said once you have me you'll always come back.
She can't behave and I'm just a slave,
don’t worry I'll be gone when the morning comes.
Darling what is going on?
Honestly that never happened
Lying is your favorite passion.
Leave me, go where you belong
Higher heels and lipstick napkins
dying is your latest fashion.
I know you love to resist
and all it takes is a kiss
and you just love to hate me.
You know you love all the lies
so don’t act surprised
that I just love to hate you.
I kissed your lips you pulled my hair it was the craziest thing.
I love the girls who love to hate. [Breathing]
(Whoa) Darling what is going on?
Honestly that never happened
Lying is your favorite passion.
Leave me, go where you belong
Higher heels and lipstick napkins,
dying is your latest fashion
Darling (leave me) what is going on?
Honestly that never happened
Lying is your favorite passion
Leave me (darling) go where you belong
Higher heels and lipstick napkins,
dying is your favorite passion
define amok(amuck): wildly; without self-control; in a murderous frenzy.
A contest entry
- Turn This Baby On! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended April 18, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems and Songs by gentle breeze.
495 points, ended June 4, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thanks for entering. Good luck in the contest
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great write dear
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I love the word amok... It is a very cool word. I think it describes the way things go in my life quite well.
Well done tying the lyrics in with your poem and especially the start of it was very fascinating. It draws your reader in.
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this was great. woohoo. and i love your inspiration too. can't wait to read more of your stuff.
much love,
the existentialist
p.s. if your interested, i wrote a song you might like "My Favorite Mistake". it's got sort of a sexy edgy feel to it. feel free to read (and comment) lol. -
i know this is probably that dirty pretty style, but the whole random punctuation kind of took away from it. It is not a bad piece, but I feel that the punctuation was kind of distracting. just my honest opinion.... other than that, it was a good read.
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I can definately see where you got your inspiration from. you did a great job with this one. thank you for sharing. keep up the great work. peace and light always, kp
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omg! I fucking love this. You are my new favorite person. I might just print this out and give it somebody who...well this poem is just perfect. It's perfect anyway but espacially with my situation right now. mind if I give it to a friend? She'd appriciate it too.
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absolutly. its really touching that you wanna show ur friend
cookies&&[love]
xXintimateXx
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Beautiful... I love the puctiuation and the words were just perfect.
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Kyahh!!!!! *mega hxc squee** this is awesome, and since i listened to the song while reading this I really got a good feel to your poem. It fit and was super mega awesome. I love it...especially the dirrty pretty format.
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yay
who wants to have an orgasm with us oooohhhh
thank you for commenting hon.
*luffs*
cookies&&[love]
~{ I N T I M A T E }~
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this is great i really enjoyed reading this.
your punctuation is very original and i've never seen anyone write like this.
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wow i loved this. just wow
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really!
thnx.
i personally thought it kinda sucked
but im just hXc like that
i think everything of mine sucks.
im glad u like it.
cookies&&[love]
~{ I N T I M A T E }~
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