Why do you let him push you around?
You don't seem to care,
Thats what I've found.
Why do you spend all your time with him?
I only ask for an hour or two,
the light of our friendship is going dim.
Why am I your rebound friend to talk to when he isn't there?
I'm off alone feeling like s***,
While your thinking you make a good pair.
Why don't you know that when he's gone,
I might not be there?
Please tell me what you think
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Oh yeah, I've been here before, and it's pretty damn unpleasant. Don't you just love it when a close friend is in a bad relationship and they don't know it? Grrr. Anyways awesome job on this! I love your writing. Keep it up!
Luvs,
Cj
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This is really good. You can tell you've put a lot of work into it. I hope everything works out for you and your friend.
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I love it. there's a lot of emotion and I think you displayed your point very well. I hate being walked all over and I don't know anybody who does. great job with this write. I love it.
<333
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an awesome piece here, so much emotion and I'm sorry you had to go through this. hope all is better now, truly a heartfelt piece though, thats for sure. great write, and you seem to be a great poet, keep up the awesome work
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wow.
Why do i suddenly get the feeling that this is about me? man liz. i didnt know that it was this bad. I'm not mad or anything i just need to do a lot more thinking cuz i dont wanna lose my bff. you mean a lot to me and i dont just wanna lose you. i need help right now with trying to clear my head and im srry if i havent been making sence lately im just as confused as u are. ur truly a great friend and i need you. thx for being there for me.
lylas
~Monty~!
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Just so true, deep and powerful, the pain and the things happening because of love, it's like becoming selfish, losing our friends and stuff...
How this happens all the time, every second of everyday
I hope you're feeling better there,
antonio
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