Lost in the moment
Young hearts entwined.
Falling in love
For the very first time.
Do you remember the wonder
Of how it all felt.
One look from your sweetheart
Your whole heart would melt.
She was your hero
So big and so strong.
To be by her side
Is all that you longed.
The touch of her hand
The first tender kiss.
Together forever
Your ultimate wish.
Her date at the dance
Your first strapless gown.
Dancing all night
Arms tightly around.
Sweet, sweet memories
Of innocent times.
Beautiful moments
When young love first shines.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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replace she with he,
and you'll have me thinking of my first love.....
amazing....
i love it!!!
well written nicely flowed even rhymed!!!
major points in my book!!
you can fell all of the emotion!!
the passion and love in this poem
i love it!!!
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Just a beautiful poem...
love is love, and if it
finds you, God...bask in
it! Thank you so much
for commenting on my
poetry...had you not, I
never would have had the
pleasure of reading you.
Love, Lane -
i hope this is a poem that is celebrating your relationship, one we spoke earlier of - it feels so real - i hope it is all working out for you both, i really do. blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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I've never really had a "first love" experience with a woman, mostly because the women I've been with never really were the type for that. I can see this, though, imagine it as if this were my own memory.
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