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Waiting Angel

She walks in the light
Always searching
For her own.
There they stand
Watching
The forest swallows
Leaving no trace
Of what she's left
Behind.
Darkness engulfs her
Surrounding her
Making her gasp
With each breath
She draws.
Crystal raindrops
Fall at her feet
The tears
Of an angel
Waiting.

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  • Moonlit-Reveries
    April 21, 2007

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    I can relate to this girl, searching for her own light and purpose in life. It's so true that we must find our own light and not just imitate someone else's. I like your ending too. This was pretty inspiring and the way you put it was so beautiful and captivating.


  • McFairy
    April 6, 2007

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    I find this kind of inspiring in a dark way, yes it's darkly inspiring, in the sense of leaving the past were it is supposed to be, and waiting is a form of hope for the future, if we were not waiting, it would mean we have nothing to wait for, and that would be worse than anything else that ever happened in the past. Anyways, I know what I'm talking about and I really enjoyed this.

    ***Strangeangel***


  • Muirghiel
    April 3, 2007
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    Perhaps if she followed the crystal path and made it a purpose to leave the darkness behind...