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Kerosene

Kerosene splashes on the floor
I remember the pain you caused.


You just had to say you cared.



But you didn't.


So I don't either.







April 2, 2007

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Kerosene

the wasteland

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  • honey bear
    April 4, 2007

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    wow.. amazing work, how lovely to see you writing once more but how sad and dark a write good luck in the contest with this very good work