I looked into your eyes,
only to find another in your sight.
I touched your lips with my fingertips,
to find you have kissed someone else.
I take your hand in mine,
just to find you have already held hers.
I rap my arms around you in an embracing hug,
and I smell her perfume on your shirt.
I might be to young to try to find love,
but when my heart falls for someone like you it hurts.
Dark hair and beautiful eyes,
a prince with another love.
I can be happy for you,
and I am happy that you yourself are happy.
When inside I know I'd be better,
but I'm not that girl who will go crazy.
Thanks for letting me learn a lesson in love,
puppy-love is very cruel but very fun.
I'm happy because I can now tell you,
I've gone over my head.
And I still think I'm better then her.
Author notes
I'm 15 ^_^
A contest entry
- love poems (13yrs-18yrs) by Shacadia Shay.
390 points, ended May 3, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow, this is good. nicely written & it makes sense. this sort of thing happens a lot. best of luck in your love life & in my contest.
--Blessed be--
Dark Princess Vampire -
Romantic
Its sweet, romantice and pure.. I realy like it! Thanks for sharing
Debbie
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Kitty
Hey very sad but i like your pride. -
I may be old, but I can still feel the pain of those early romances and the hurt of breaking up. Take it from me, it doesn't get any less painful as you get older, it just seems to happen less frequently.
This is pretty sad. Because of the things I just said, I understand everything you have written. It's real and skillfully worded. I hope you do well in this comp
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Thanks for letting me learn a lesson in love,
puppy-love is very cruel but very fun.
I'm happy because I can now tell you,
I've gone over my head.
And I still think I'm better then her
keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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