White sand, warm and inviting
Warm breeze coming off the sea
Island life, relaxed but exciting
Steel drums are calling me
Tall drinks with little umbrellas
No phones or fax machines
Just you here with your fella
Loving life, living the dream
Steel drums in the distance
Calling out to me
I want to take you darling
To an island in the sea
You and me together
Sipping Mai Tais in the sun
I want to make you happy
I want you to have fun
Loving life, down by the ocean
Salt air and the tropic sun
Island sounds put me in motion
Come join me for the fun
Let痴 pack, get out of the city
We値l play in the sand tonight
In a sarong, you値l look so pretty
I can稚 wait for such a sight
Steel drums in the distance
Calling out to me
I want to take you darling
To an island in the sea
You and me together
Sipping Mai Tais in the sun
I want to make you happy
I want you to have fun
New life, here on the island
New start for you and me
Sunsets on the horizon
We値l live down by the sea
You値l be queen of the palm trees
Your wish is my command
We値l dance in the sweet breeze
We値l make love in the sand
Steel drums in the distance
Calling out to me
I want to take you darling
To an island in the sea
You and me together
Sipping Mai Tais in the sun
I want to make you happy
You are my only one
A contest entry
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Comments
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Whimsical and romantic....your style and verse are only exceeded by your charm!
Absolutely dreamy!
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Nice write i rlly like the mello felling it has to it good luck
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You could also maybe put this in the category "Hopeful." Very nice. I could see this being a hit. It reminds me of oldies, kind of. I hope you take that as a compliment because I mean it as a compliment. So nice job. Thanks for sharing, take care.
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Thanks!!
It should remind you of the oldies-since i am an "oldie" myself! lol!!
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