Waves crashing,
Gulls calling.
Echoes of ships,
Their foghorns sounding.
A touch,
A sigh.
Slipping deeper,
Into one another.
The music plays,
A moonlit serenade.
All worries and fears,
Washed away.
Thoughts of others,
Gone with the tide.
Hurts of the past,
Blasted by the sand.
Murmers of contentment,
Shudders of pleasure.
Voices rising,
Flowing with the seas.
Becoming one,
Together in this place.
No other can compare,
Time stops.
There is nothing,
Nothing but two.
They are forever locked,
A passionate embrace.
Hearts pounding,
Breaths short.
A haze,
Unknown.
Frightening,
Yet thrilling.
They've never been here,
A first love.
Lasting moments,
Engrained as the sand.
Written on their hearts,
As the waves engrave the stone.
Forever and a day,
This love will play on.
Each will close their eyes,
And feel the other in their arms.
In a distance they will hear again,
The moonlit serenade.
Author notes
Picture #5
A contest entry
- Touch and Taste~ Erotica Challenge~ by Angel With No Halo.
1100 points, ended April 12, 2007, 13 entries
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Wonderful
Great descriptions and a terrific write.
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What wonderful visuals these lines paint through your words - very sensual and flowing this poem is. Easy to read and understand the sentiments you express so well here. Nice to end the poem with the title.
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First loves...ahh..cherished memories and untold warmth forever lives on in our hearts and minds..this was excellent use of words, i love how you did not use unecessary words..the words seem to string along endlessly and the imagery was awesome...good job! good luck in this contest!
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This was quite lovely to read. The flow was very nice. The thought of first love again. I wish I could go back and do it all over. The rush of adrenaline you get when you fall for the first time.. with anyone really. I loved this poem. It was so soothing and calm.. and made me think back to many a day in the arms of my first love. Thank you for your entry and good luck to you!!!
~Krys~
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Very nicely done, delicate and sensual. "Lasting moments,
Engrained as the sand.
Written on their hearts,
As the waves engrave the stone." These lines contained wonderful imagery. Thank you so much for participating and best wishes to you.
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