Please dont harass her any longer,
with your thoutghful words of hate.
Shes hoping you have come to relize,
you are already to late.
Shes been planning now,
for quite some time.
That brilliant way to escape.
Free from it all,
the pain and love.
She thinks.
There is no time to waste.
So she chooses the pills.
The sharp red blade.
The names of people.
Who made her this way.
She carves them into her arm.
And ends all this.
It wasnt too hard.
So remember now.
When you think of her.
The crazy, lonely one.
Remember now,
how you could have stopped her.
From all the things shes done.
A contest entry
- OPTIONS!! hava look! by Crazy-Baby.
585 points, ended April 15, 2007, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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This was a really great write and you should beam with pride from it. great write, and thanks for entering and best of luck
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hey! this was an awesome write...i can really relate to what you are saying and feeling as well in this poem..sometimes thinking of escaping is the only relief you can get...i really enjoyed reading this keep writting and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~
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*whistles* that wuz a great poem...my favorite part wuz:
So she chooses the pills.
The sharp red blade.
The names of people.
Who made her this way.
that wuz just wow...thanx for entering in my contest...i would give u some clappy dudes but im all out so l8r -
This was really depressing and deep. The rhyme was good. Very natural. Great flow. Great message. Good luck in the contest.
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this is a really really good piece of writing, its so powerful and i absolutly love the 1st 4 lines. well done and thanx for entering xxx
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great write
your awesome girl, i love these words and i have od'd before and cut so i know what it feels like good job
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DARLING
awwww megan i love this... but i dont understand who this is about. or is it randomm? lol anyways great write i absolutely love it.
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