Dad, Im sending this message to let you know
even tho I am not on earth as you are, I am well
Oh how I remember the good times we shared
the fun we had as I was growing up
I would like you to look back to the times we laughed and smiled
I know you have days that you are sad that I am not there
just remember the times we rode our bikes
ate ice cream on warm summer days
all the nights that you tucked me into bed
not to mention the mornings you woke me for school
Know that I love you
keep in mind that someday we will be together once again
it has been two long years for you that I have been gone
know that I am awaiting the day when our spirits meet again
to roam the heavens upon the clouds
for now Dad live your life
life was a gift to be lived
not a problem to be solved
I live within you
I am in your heart
I am your son
you are my Dad
my best friend
keep the faith
In Gods name Amen
Amen
A contest entry
- In Honor of Adam -Invite Only by B Chandler.
3600 points, ended April 8, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What do I say to such woderful friends I have here at AP. I will keep these poems and read each one to him at his site on his memorial date, also I will be adding them to his page here. These precious words you all have written here have touched me more than you will ever know and the tears the words have brought. But tears I wouldnt trade for the world to and from you beautiful people here. I thank you from the very bottom of my heart for taking this time from your valueable days and family. God bless...Love GETS
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Amazing
It was... well wonderful
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Thanks for the comment, and for checking out my poem......
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you owe me 2 dollar for two box of tissues!!! superb
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B Chandler
Thanks for the message I'll email you 2.oo hahahaaaa a nice contest for a super GUY...
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Please forgive my standarized comment here, but I am too emotional to see or think straight to leave a proper comment but felt a comment was certainly called for. I want to thank you for taking the time to honor Gary and his son Adam. Your words and sentiment are truly felt, trust me. My tears don't lie.
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You owe me one dollar for a box of tissues I used reading this. -
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Thank you Celticmoon for the comment, nothing standered to me your comment is worth a million bucks to me, I am so sorry that i didnt see this sooner for some reason my page doesnt always show me a comment was made I seem to find them very often. Ill email you a dollar... lol....... ooh make that 5.oo
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Spirtual strength is indeed your forte and that shows ever so evident here. You perfect it well into an artform
and are a prime living example to boot. Beautiful poem and beautiful spirits both on the part of the subjects and the author.
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Very nice! Three bunnies.
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WATCH OUT FOR THOSE HOMOPHONES!!
Your title: You're not Your -
Beautiful poem! Great poem and uplifting poem for a father who has lost a child! Wonderful words of comfort!
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goalsv
Thank you for reading and such a nice comment!
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