It falls like rain
But doesn't chill
It eases pain
Without a pill
It warms your heart
It makes you laugh
It keeps men on
A straighter path
It tears down kingdoms
It builds them up
It feeds your soul
It fills your cup
It heals
It wounds
It makes you cry
You'll long to live
You'll want to die
It brings together
It tears away
It lights the night
It darkens day
A feeling that you can't control...
It's there... It fades..
But when it's true...
It never dies
It flickers on
Waiting
Waiting.
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Wow this poem is brilliant, I'm sorry that you feel this way but you have summed up your emotions really strongly through so few words, i like the flow for most of it but i'm not keen on the line "A feeling that you can't control" thats because to me it feels like it ruins the flow of the poem. A good write nevertheless
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