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Silenced

Quiet;
That's how he's known;
Quiet;

Everyone makes fun of him;
For being silenced;
Shut out to the outside world.

So many insults;
Every word is a blade.

He never found his voice;
He did break his silence; 
He broke it with the sound of a gat.

You always have a choice;
Find your voice.

Author notes

A gat is a gun for the people that read this and don't know what it means.

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  • nobodys-girl
    April 6, 2007

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    kinda confused as to what a gat is but otherwise this was amazing. im one of thouse kids who doesnt use her voice to often. unless i really care about someone or something i keep my mouth shut. awesome poem, thankyou for entering and good luck!

  • PoeticDownfall
    April 4, 2007
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    is gat a gun or did u just mean gun? this poem is rly powerful.but note me back