No one but you
has put me under a spell
of sleepless nights.
No one but you
can pull me out of darkness
back into the light.
No one but you
can free my battered heart
from it's cage.
No one but you
can snap me out of this
loveless stage.
No one but you
can make the scars on my heart
miraculously heal.
No one but you
took all of my dreams about true love
and made them real.
No one but you
with the simplest of embraces
chased away my fears.
No one but you
with the gentlest of caresses
swept away my tears.
No one but you
assured me that it was once again
safe to trust.
No one but you
gathered up my fears
and shattered them to dust.
No one but you
at the slightest touch
made me want to soar.
No one but you
resurrected these new emotions
never felt before.
No one but you
has set my soul on fire
in a great blaze.
No one but you
has sent me staggering
in an emotional daze.
No one but you
has made me flush
from the fire's heat.
No one but you
at the sweetness of your voice
has swept me off my feet.
No one but you
sends my spirit soaring
up so high.
No one but you
mended my broken wings
and convinced me to fly.
No one but you
can create the effect
of butterflies fluttering about.
No one but you
can strip my conscious clean
of all doubt.
Author notes
this poem was written for this special person who is currently the man i Love. He has been there through thick and thin and i will always love him for it, no matter what
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"Wow this is me"...every part of this poem fits me...even the trust one...it might not seem like it now...but she's the only one to make it possible again...I love every part of this piece as usual...and it's true...no one but her...<3...8.5/10!
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beautiful...i know someone who would just say "wow this is me" if he read this poem. there's one small part that wouldnt fit with him though...the one about trust. i pretty much screwed that up for us...working on building it back though =)
very nice, i liked the repetition! -
You've got a special love here!
I enjoyed the feeling and flow - but I'm not too much for the chant style - found myself skipping the first line instead of reading it! (Forgive me I'm probably just irritable and old!)
Thanks for your entry & Good Luck in my contest!
Tang
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Emotion!
I like this poem it goes deep and I like the way it is written, thank you for entering one of my favorite parts is:
"No one but you
can free my battered heart
from it's cage."
Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!
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Very clever, a deep expression of your emotions....they come through loud and clear. The repetition has a good impact on the piece. Thanks for the entry in my contest.
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