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There's Always A Reason For That New Look

She wants to grow her bangs and hide her face

Maybe then no one can see those tears

That well up in her lonely eyes.

 

Like an echo of the beat of her heart,

She wishes it would stop

So she blasts the music through her soul

Like a bullet to the head.

 

The sound of silence slowly drives her insane,

And as she waits,

She longs for a day when she can be let free

From her prison cell of hell.

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  • Never-Loved13
    June 16, 2007
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    i liked this, i can really relate to this,
    very nicely writen,

    ~navy~


    • The Life Led
      June 16, 2007
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      Thank you so much ^^
      Your comment means a lot to me!
      [xoRawRxo]


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    May 18, 2007

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    Can Relate...

    We always try to hide from ourselves...

    You have made this point really clear in this piece...

    I applaud you for that!!


  • UniquelytheSame
    April 13, 2007

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    I loved this one lill sis, wonderful you captured what i feel like on most days. ^_~ keep up the good work!


  • locked door
    April 10, 2007

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    an amazing piece of work one of your most intense emotionaly to me that one line is so perfect
    "So she blasts the music through her soul
    Like a bullet to the head."
    stay strong you will find yourself along the way



  • Balldinger silver member
    April 4, 2007

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    a smear on the seaside wall is but a smudge on the reasons for new looks. especially liked the "blasting of music thu the soul like a bullet to the head" part. Perhaps a more twisted ending part than the cliche that came along and leaves the mouth watering. Good piece though... ~ EZB

    http://www.moodgroove.com

    • The Life Led
      April 4, 2007
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      Thank you so much for the critical comment. It really means a lot. Although, because this is 100% personal, this was the way the story went. If it wasnt this personal I would definitely take your advice and change it up =]


  • angelsslayer
    April 3, 2007
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    Powerful write. Full of raw emotion that hooked me in.


  • She burns
    April 3, 2007

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    So sad and very touching, the pain and tears everyday, how much it bleeds, the stabbing inside you, killing you more and more, deeply with every feelings.....

    I hope you're feeling better,
    antonio

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