Oh precious one
Where have ye' gone
Away
Away
Away
To fervent Stream
In far off dream
To await
In dawn of day
Oh come ye
Father
Of my
Heart
Its you
I wait
For
Here
For
Precious Was
Your love
For me
Ever still
I hold it
Dear
Author notes
I chose option one
A contest entry
- In Honor of Adam -Invite Only by B Chandler.
3600 points, ended April 8, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What do I say to such woderful friends I have here at AP. I will keep these poems and read each one to him at his site on his memorial date, also I will be adding them to his page here. These precious words you all have written here have touched me more than you will ever know and the tears the words have brought. But tears I wouldnt trade for the world to and from you beautiful people here. I thank you from the very bottom of my heart for taking this time from your valueable days and family. God bless...Love GETS
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Please forgive my standarized comment here, but I am too emotional to see or think straight to leave a proper comment but felt a comment was certainly called for. I want to thank you for taking the time to honor Gary and his son Adam. Your words and sentiment are truly felt, trust me. My tears don't lie.
PS
You owe me one dollar for a box of tissues I used reading this. -
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Thank you for the beautiful comment actually I'm just amazed that so many like this , as I wrote it I just wasn't sure I would be able to convey my heart , Storm
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superb
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gee thanks , Storm
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ummm that was a compliment
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sweet write
This is soft and cuddles the heart in such a warm embrace of affection. Loved this. Great job. ;f
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oh thank you , really glad you liked it . Storm
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I found this to be lovely and thought provoking. You structure combined with the verbiage created a smooth relaxing flow. Well done!
Love,
Amera
PS: I like the background, you see I'm not human; I'm an elf.
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Thank you Amera , I'm a bit of an elf myself , Storm
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I found this to be lovely and thought provoking. You structure combined with the verbiage created a smooth relaxing flow. Well done! Love, Amera PS: I like the background, you see I'm not human; I'm an elf.
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Very very nice! I likey! Three bunnies!
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Glad you liked it my friend , thank you for your comment , Storm
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