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Sweet William D...

He was born on April Fools day
a funny prankster on his way
Living life with glorious flare
calling all he could to dare

 

Leaving me saddened on his way out
my heart felt sick without a doubt
Smiling in life he did with glee
going home to heaven to be free

 

I miss him so with all his pranks
thinking back on his military rank
Those guys he served with must have blew a gut
keeping them fun from their military rut

 

A jokester among the ranks command
laughing with every shouted demand
He lived a life of fun and hope
letting his family deal and cope

 

With sickness hitting his body sore
fleeing out of this world evening the score.

Every April fools day that comes around

we think of things he did so profound

 

I look to the phone to wait for the foolish rings

a sound that never comes, sad silence my heart sings.

Empty moments flood my soul with happy tears

as I look back on all the wonderful years.

 

 

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~Honorable Winner~ramblin contest (Memories)

My Uncle Dub...God Rest His Soul on the sweet angelic wings that he was born into this world with...

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  • Jillybean128
    June 29, 2008
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    Awww...

    Very beautiful write. Best of luck to you in this contest...this deserves a prize!!


  • Donna-Jones
    April 12, 2007

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    AWESOME

    Cheryl, This is a wonderful tribute to my Daddy.{sniff} I know you & Christy miss him as bad as I do. He was truely a very special man. I love you! Donna


  • dustookie2
    April 3, 2007

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    oh sis love the visual impact on my eyes What a beautiful tribute to you Uncle I am sure he would approve of your words as he sounds just one heck of nice man full of fun and ready to be the jester in the crowd. I bet you do have many a funny memory as each year you remember he will live on in the hearts that love him. Your lines flow with a nice rhyme pattern which really is best when read aloud as you hear the pattern as you say it. Thank you sis for the pleasure of ths read good luck in the contest


  • ramblin
    April 2, 2007
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    This is so loving... a real tribute to your uncle. He sounds like quite the guy I'm so sorry you've lost him, though I have a feeling he's hanging around pretty close, not wanting to miss the chance for another of his jokes on those he loves.

    A superb write, and good presentation

    ramblin


  • Sweet Sorrow
    April 2, 2007

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    What a great tribute for someone you love. Sad yet full of meanings and the rhymming is splendid. Such a sweet poem to dedicate for someone. Beautifully written. Goodluck my dear.


  • aliceramone
    April 2, 2007

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    great tribute to your uncle...may the lord bless his soul...great heart-felt write filled with joy, sadness and emotions...excellent write to a man that obviously touched your soul very deeply...God bless


  • Jeneralix
    April 2, 2007

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    Awww....this is such a sweet poem. A nice tribute to your uncle. I like how you rhymed it and it flows really well. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
    ur sis, Jenerali

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