Just beyond the murky corridors
of this bleak reality.
There lies a place of fascination.
A paradise hidden securely in the mind.
In this realm of wonder
dreams bloom like flowers in spring.
Skies burst into rapturous bliss
to the sweet melodies of crystal sea's.
Glorified beings of this euphoric sphere
ride on the wings of the wind.
Traveling with the clouds to dimensions
that fold into new worlds of discovery.
In this heavenly body of enlightenment
creatures evolve with the setting and
rising of each anticipated day.
The elements fuse with its inhibitants
to form an emersion of enchantment and mystery.
The boundaries of imagination are set to infinity.
Creative life is spawned in joyous ecstasy.
As the rebirth of a brave new universe
spread across the eons of space like wildfire.
Casting images of everlasting beauty
throughout the channels of eternity.
Author notes
Link to inspiration of poem below.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2344376
A contest entry
- Let Your Imagination Run Free #8 (Picture Contest) by Aussie Gypsy.
500 points, ended April 23, 2007, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautiful, it is serene and wonderful... you have captured quite a story in this picture
Thanks for taking the time to enter, I wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
Glorious!
There is peace in every word. I know in my deepest heart that this place you so eloquently describe exists. The heavenly smiles at these lines. I yearn for this place and thank you for letting me know that others will be there with "wings" outstretched.
"Glorified beings of this euphoric sphere
ride on the wings of the wind.
Traveling with the clouds to dimensions
that fold into new worlds of discovery."
Simply, soothingly beautiful! I loved every moment of this poem and am glad it was my first read of the day. The sun is shining and the glory of God abounds.
I wish you well in this challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Oh love this..."The elements fuse with its inhibitants
to form an emersion of enchantment and mystery." You provided me with such a dreamy like state that I actually had to force my jaw closed and wipe up the drool...and snap out of it! Excellent imagery, and so worthy of a shiney thing....absolute quality shines here!
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This is beautiful! "Skies burst into rapturous bliss to the sweet melodies of crystal sea's."Creative life is spawm]ned injoyous ecstacy." Thank you for this journey on this colorful,wonderful place .
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