You condescend and play pretend
hoping I will change,
but when this little game does end
I will still remain
so sweetie stop complaining
cause I won't start refraining
from speaking my mind.. don't press rewind
I will never be your perfect girl
I was born to rise and change the world
so baby if you want to hold me
you better not try to control me
I'm free
and that's who I am!
You think I'm weak and cowardly
but I will take the lead
I'm stronger than you'll ever know
I'll bite the hand that feeds
so sweetie stop complaining
cause I won't start refraining
from speaking my mind.. don't press rewind
I will never be your perfect girl
I was born to rise and change the world
so baby if you want to hold me
you better not try to control me
I'm free
and that's who I am!
I will make a change
(so sweetie stop complaining)
I willstill remain
(cause I won't start refraining)
from speaking my mind.. don't press rewind
I will never be your perfect girl
I was born to rise and change the world
so baby if you want to hold me
you better not try to control me
I'm free
and that's who I am!
Please tell me what you think
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Shout out to someone, perhaps? :P
Is this a song? It really feels like one, and I like it. It almost seems writings about "being that perfect girl" are becoming a bit cliche, though. None the less, you have executed it very well, forcing me to look past its cliche with your artistically written, valiant promise to rise up and revolutionize the world as it stands.
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Thank you for your comment.. I must agree that these kinds of poems are pretty cliche.. and I found mine to be quite cliche even while I was writing it. But Idk...
Your comment is much appreciated =]
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You are going to make a change.
I see it now..You are going to do something great
that will make a huge impact on people.
And no one can stop you from speaking your mind..
as we all know.. you have a "big mouth." ;]
..Another great poem!!!.. no surprise there!
And Looky!! I'm commenting.
So that means.. you need to post more poems!!
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I love this poem, Victoria. Your poems are always amazing and this is no exception. I love it.
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