I ask myself why
You had to die
In your coffin
I cry
Now I'm all alone
And your a stone
I cry on
I want you to know
I wont let you go
I cry
For you
I grow flowers for you
To plant anew
In the spring
I cry
There's only one kiss
That I miss
I cry
For you
A contest entry
- A Quickie Contest...... Rhymning (720 points) 48 Hours Extending it a bit longer! by Heavens Child.
600 points, ended August 24, 2007, 47 entries
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Comments
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This definitely has some feeling in it. I feel your sorrow and loss as I read this write. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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Sad and to the point! Thanks for entering! x
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This is very sad. THanks for entering.
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This is so sad
So simple but so much emotion is held within it's depths. Beautiful! Thank you for entering and good luck 
Leslie -
Such a sad piece. It's so simplistic in its essence yet the emotion is so deep. Thank you for the entry in my contest.
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Simple and to the point. I like it. Thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck.
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nice, this is just awesome
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this is stunning in its simplicity i love it, that you don't have to use heaps of words to create such a heart wrenching piece congrats on a fantastic poem thank you so much for entering
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Thanks for entering and good luck.
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I truly love the fact that you do not over-do your poems. I (hopefully) am of the same ilk. I much prefer it when the words speak for themselves rather than adding another hundred that do not speak at all. Great!
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this should definetly make you a finalist in the contest you've entered. how could such a lovely work of art be rejected?
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So sad. You wrote a very emotional and heart wrenching piece here, alot different from what I normally read from you. But very beautiful and touching aswell.
Goodluck in the contest you entered because this piece is truely amazing! -
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Someday I will post a couple of my first writes and you will see the old me,or the young me.
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