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I Wish I Knew

I wish I knew where you were
Because I need you here with me
My heart is breaking in my chest
And I can't stand to breathe

This hollowness I feel within
Kills my hopes and makes me cry
I think of all the time I lost
Waiting for you to finally find me

You're the missing piece of my heart
You're the reason that I breathe
I just don't know who you are
And why you're so important to me

Author notes

Not really sure just this feeling that I have. Missing someone I've never met but I know that I need them and I won't be right until I find them

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  • recoverymom
    April 2, 2007

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    To me this rings true. When ever my hubby is in active addiction I feel this way. It is funny you are writing about someone you never met but for me it is what I have. great write.


  • angelsslayer
    April 2, 2007
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    Touching write. The emotion comes out of the poem strongly.