A passive love expecting
No new hopes reflecting
Love once fiery
Now all but gone
The sublime has
Come along
Seems ageless in
Its' going,
Comprehension slowing'
Without one knowing
Love has all but
Passed
Till one sees in splendour
Loves' character it renders
In qualities so wonderful
One thought were not
real!
Hallucinating power
Falls upon this flower
That thought dead forever
Now on it descends!
Love in demonstration
Of words and life in mention
Releases all the tension
Of love forever lost
Now becomes alive!
Love in words and action
Truly are a passion
The giving, and true living
Are not false but true!
This inferno never dying
None can quench for trying
True love is unstoppable
What I see in you!
Author notes
When I saw this word bank contest, I love them..And needing a challenge again,thought this would be worth the risk of taking again..Wonderful challenge..challenging words!
A contest entry
- In love or lust? by Myjoy.
450 points, ended April 3, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hey man...!!! you are surely a great poet and I love the amazing write..the imagery is beautiful and strong and is very deep!! it rhymed good too at some places which was the best part..The lyrics make this one of more importance and this one is just amazing.
this is a great job, and i look forward to read more of yours. ANd do take a look at my work too, i wud be very thankful to u for this act of kindness
best of luck for more!!!
God bless,
Love,
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This inferno never dying
None can quench for trying
True love is unstoppable
What I see in you!
This is really so heartfelt and so universal poem revealing the truth of the life and its beauty and its strength as well.This is a very soft gesture of the muse shown by the poet touching the depth of the heart..A great write indeed..
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The love described is more than true but it's wholesome and filled. No one has to guess about the love and to me that's beautiful. To not have to second guess a love is when you actually find true love. The description in this poem is amazingly effective and so many people dream about this type of love but they never actually find it. So beautiful write.
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This is quite a beautiful piece you have working for you. Your use of description and imagery really sets of the poem so that your readers can fully understand and appreciate the subject. Nicely done!
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This is an amazing poem it shows dedication, And straight to the heart emotiomns to love, Awsome thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work, You are a very talented poet.
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beautiful
I loved it. Again,beautiful -
I think that this is very nice Love can come and go. It can be good and it can be painful.Love is sometimes hard to handle and sometimes you wish it would never end. But sometimes you just wish it would end that you have had enough you can't be with the guy or girl you Love. breaking up would be better.it's always hard to know what one wants out of life.
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Any questions....some of it is personal
Knowing true love when you see it... -
Hi Draco
As I said the inspiration came from the word bank,and thpoem seemed to flow from that -
great job. you made use of the word bank in an awesome way. good going. thanks for sharing. good luck with the contest. peace and light always in all ways, kp
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very pretty. last stanza was really good. It was a good poem with some neat rhyming. You did a nice job with this piece!
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Loved the last stanza, is what i truly hope to see one day standing before me, lovely thoughts that make me sigh. Love, C
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'This inferno never dying
None can quench for trying
True love is unstoppable
What I see in you!'
Impressive poem all the way through, but this last stanza screams volumes. Ture love unstoppable, What I see you. Those right there stopped me in my tracks! Amazing poem! Godo luck in your contest,
~Sie
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Love has all but
Passed
Till one sees in splendour
Loves' character it renders
In qualities so wonderful
One thought not were
real
I really love those lines.
you ending is powerful and beautiful.
an unstoppable love.
how amazing is that.
perfect write my friend.
manyblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Wonderful. Well done and a great tribute to true love. This was a joy to read and good luck in the contest.
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