Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Sweet, Dear, Precious Brother

Come,
sweet brother,
The rain has stopped,

Don't be scared,
My tiny body,
can protect you,

Be carefull,
for you won't be,
just like our father,

But make sure,
dear brother,
that you keep mother's eyes,

Teach me,
world's greatest,
and smallest lessons,

Ignore,
My harsh words,
They're not meant for you,

Sleep,
precious brother,
and I'll lie next to you,

My big brother,
I need you...

Author notes

Noa, this is for you. The best big brother...

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • eyesofanangel524
    April 2, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    You did just as I asked. You brought me your heart and soul and shared with me the love you have for your brother. Beautifully penned. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you in the contest.