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Sunspot Scrolls

A resplendent shade of magic
like the first leaf of spring
tentative on the lips of a breeze.

Papyrus tales crumbling in the
ancient soil will someday form
a part of me.

Goblin fruit under marshmallow clouds
slowly filling my beer belly as I lie
on ochre grass somewhere on a sunspot.

Chartered underworld somewhere
in another galaxy stolen from the light
rules in forgetful command.

Dessicated wheatgrass on my
armlet laughs at the anklets on
the feet of a cloud, chains
extending beyond my imagination.

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  • TheFourSeasons
    April 15, 2007

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    It is always a pleasure to read your words.
    Very nicely written.
    T.


  • Soft Words
    April 3, 2007
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    thank you so much!


  • aShlEy2010
    April 2, 2007
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    wow

    I like this one. I think you did really good. Keep up the good work.