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With This Ring

With this ring

With this ring I thee wed
Let me take you straight to bed
Rip the clothes from your body divine
Run my fingers along your spine
To your crotch my hand will slide
Between wet lips my fingers glide
With your clit I’ll have some fun
For breath you gasp my pretty one
Your pussy gets all tight and wet
Our bodies sing a love’s duet
Juices drip down your thighs
I lap them up with eager sighs
Lick you clean with utmost delight
A glistening fanny is a wondrous sight





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  • Phed
    October 23, 2007
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    YAY

    Grr... happy honey moon!


  • Laura
    May 9, 2007

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    ohhhh lovely...the poem flows so delicately creating amazing imagery well done to you this is a wonderful poem xxx


  • Swtpoetryman
    April 28, 2007

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    THIS MADE ME HARD & HUNGRY!

    With your clit I’ll have some fun
    For breath you gasp my pretty one
    Your pussy gets all tight and wet
    Our bodies sing a love’s duet
    Juices drip down your thighs
    I lap them up with eager sighs
    Lick you clean with utmost delight
    A glistening fanny is a wondrous sight


    All I can say is that this was the perfect ending to a beautiful wedding - and sure beat the wedding feast - for it has made me hungry for what you were eating. Now that's what i call GOOD EATS - as I'm certain that you will agree. It's been a long, long time since I've stop by to read one of your juicy pieces (pun intended) and I am so fucking glad that I did - fo this hit the spot and passed my hardness test - hands down - and I don;t have to tell you where! Take care of your lovely bride, Darling.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 2, 2007

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    Brilliant yet again

    Hey, Ang, another brilliant piece of writing here. Wonderful rhyme and tongue-in-cheek brilliance, yet again from your pen. I love the flow of this as well. Brilliant imagery. [ hehe ] Keep up the great writes, sis.

    Your Bro'

    Wayne


    • -Ang-
      April 3, 2007
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      Thank you my dearest Brother, your comments are always looked forward to.

      ang


  • slavelisa
    April 2, 2007
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    hehehehe

    Very clever and very cute. I see Ang is back with full force

    Brilliant write yet again, but then you are the queen of this kind of writing.

    Well done
    me


    • -Ang-
      April 3, 2007
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      at least im the queen of something!!! thanks for reading and commenting Lisa


      ang

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