She shows emotion
Yet a darkness heads here
She shows toughness
And brightness
She lets all emotion flow
She says shes tough
You know
Yet in the rough
Shes not that tough
Glasses on her head shows smarts
Yet shes nothing but a tart
Velvet love entwine in this
With every loving kiss
She watches every step
Now let your eyes watch
She knows every step you make
Now your emblem shows
She can see you
She can hear you
Shes a friend to all
But piss her off and you will see
Her wrath in every emblem flow!
Author notes
For my friend
A contest entry
- What's a picture worth? Can you tell who she is by looking at her? Give it a try by Angierie.
600 points, ended April 11, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A poem with a twist, very nice! I love how you did the contrasting in this piece, well done. Wishing you luck in the contest.
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Excellent! I really enjoyed this.
Great write and thanks for the entry!!
Angie
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