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Koi Pond

big goldfish swim
in a tranquil pond
scene serene

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Faded silver member
    April 5, 2007

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    Awwww I really loved this. It was gentle and calming... who needs to watch fish swim around when they can simply read this gem of a haiku, eh?
    Wonderful, truely wonderful,
    ~Faded


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    April 2, 2007
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    Thankyou for your beautiful entry, Bella


  • denika
    April 2, 2007
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    smooth


  • azure85 gold member
    April 2, 2007
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    Oh, this is lovely!